[Adonis]

Oats - enjoyable. Progressed nicely and direction of topic I would imagine we all could have wrote something similar. I don't really have any complaints, I simply liked this from start to end. I've read much better from you, and after coming off a deep championship run I could only imagine the effort you put into this first verse with out defending the belt. That is not to say this wasn't dope, because it is, just not elite. Solid showing.

Pent - This shit was dope. The depth and meaning in certain individual lines were just sick, but you add to the fact the rhyme schemes were complex and firing on MOST cylenders, dope shit. I will say I did not get the full sense of use of topic. I actually think you explained more reasons why we are fucked rather than using feelings. Either way I thoroughly enjoyed this drop.


V/ Perp-dick

Overall, although I loved the inner look of Oats, especially as he mentioned shit I also went through, the schemes were not there so it was just that, "a peer into the past". Where perp had dope scheming and just overall lines packing so much info and reasoning into them.