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Old 05-04-2014, 10:43 PM   #2
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He's Medusa and plague, with Methusala's age, ruthless,

ill. i wished you had followed it up with something a little harder but the set-up was bonkers to me.

the rest was well done for a quick read. a little necro, oldschoolish feel to it. nothing too heavy, flowed like stepping stones.

youve been putting your work in for the OM. been meaning to check out more of your work

keep up the good fight, thanks


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