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Old 05-04-2014, 07:37 PM   #11
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I really enjoyed this, particularly the last section. I like the way you worded the stuff about subjectivity of perspective and how disdain can stop people being able to look past the narrow viewpoints they're conditioned with, or makes them unable to understand the concept at all. I wrote a piece called Ironically Paradoxical on here about it - it's more wordy but worth a look though.

Basically, at the end of it all you're saying how freeing it is to stop with the cerebral focus and just enjoy the moment.

I like it, its real. I feel like you could flesh it further though, cause there are so many scenarios you can paint with this. Write more man.

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