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Old 05-03-2014, 11:12 PM   #7
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This is a very dope battle and was really hard to pick a winner. Both brought it in their own way. Pen, that was a spectacular opening and I was really into your verse for about 3/4 of it and then seriously just became disinterested in it. Not for any particular reason I just got bored with it. Oats, I love the humor in this one, feels like it made it a little more personable and relatable i.e. the n-word line, the yes please vecoming word, the ukulele line ect. Honestly this is a toss up and ive read both verses a few times since last night and am finally ready to make my decision.

Mvgt= oats. No particular reason, both showed out but I feel oats stuck with me more. Great job guys
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