illergic had a cool angle, but was very scattered. didn't name his characters typa shit. sweet rhymes. some standout lines, khal of kingdoms. didnt end super strong, too many ideas tossed around and didnt focus very well on the main character i guess
frank had tiresome rhyming but good use of language. way more detail. more quotes i could pull. "before the kid beat the shit out of a nun" idk what you mean. it was alright.
both carried the topic the same distance conceptually.
V/ Frank for enjoyment and precision
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