[Frank]

Timeless.

The Putin/Obama angle felt tacked on to the already vague writing and didn't do anything for me. Once the revelation was made: I back tracked in my minds eye and could not place a finger on any sort of, connection to the turn of events, and so I chalked it up to a pointless write up. Pomegranate thoughts was the most invigorating line - I can't recall much pass that, that stood out in any way: lyrically, visually, metaphorically... The writing does not warrant a reread. Nothing about the build up beckoned me to give it another go. Know what I'm saying? Your run on sentence style is light and does not carry weight in the literary sense. However, with that being said, it seems to me that that is your your style, so keep at it. And as for the tie into the topic......stretch of the imagination

Adonis

You missed an @ sign for Zenland. And Mercy had the @ sign, but was not underlined - defeating the purpose. I didn't like that. But all your other @ signs were flawlessly underlined with cutting edge technology. Then again, your @ certain was sloppy. The concept of the perfect man and mentioning everyone in the league was excellent subconscious sway technique.Story ending on a powerful note leaned my decision more in your favor. Referring to Vulgar as the goat was ill advised. Saying Time was wack was a topical stab at your opponent. You are one of the dirtiest players in this league. That line I was mentioned in I interpreted as some sort of flattery. The verse is far from perfect, very far from it actually. It is imperfect: This my friend is where you succeed

MVGT Adonis