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Whatever way you choose to see is cool with me.
I used to think
that every person realized they spoke in viewpoint eulogies.

^dope. Im guessing that is talking about how everything in life is constantly shifting, becoming something new as a byproduct of existence. Movement and locality was important here, structurally. The parentheses reminded me of gears, working together in synchronicity to create something beyond their own limited scope. Lots of parallels between this idea and the semantics of language, like "poetry is honest" or something. Your word choice is a bit awkward but also on point.

I always like your writings because every thought is important to the interpretation of the piece. Dense in a good way. I won't give this a full breakdown but I liked the ideas you were playing with