Well this is a pretty one sided battle imo, jm you really had something going here and I wish you would have had time to finish (I hope this wasnt the finished product) you have one of the most impeccable flows in the league and since your first drop ive looked forward to reading your pieces each week. Vivid, awesome storytelling ability. Each one of your pieces feel like im watching a movie, just always enjoyable. This was the same although I feel many sometimes you use TOO much dialogue at times, which sometimes makes it feel choppy. Regardless great piece
Mvgt=vivid
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