Adonis- fucking beautiful dude. I loved the concise, regimented, yet poetic nature this piece had. I liked the imagery, though it wasn't far out amazing, and I really liked the crisp ending. This is a good version of you. This is a you I can vote for :)
Dyed- I think this piece had a big heart. I also think this heart could have been displayed with a more connected final feeling in conjunction with the topic. I really like certain qualities of this but it mnade me want for more of what I expected to feel from something with sunject matter this supposedly deep. I liked this, but I didn't love the ending.
MVGT Adonis for the near perfect piece per the approach. Very sound, concise piece. Good job both of you.
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