[Adonis]

This was a fun battle. Both similar, both a bit gruesome which I enjoyed. There were wording issues with both, the lay outs of sentence breaks and shit if you get that. Well I liked john's overall message, zombie had the more enjoyable verse even if he was scatter brain toward the end as well as maybe a bit too lengthy and not changing the tone or violence. So on one hand I have a verse written decent with a better use meaningful message vs. Vivid imagery of death over and over and over again. Cool and fine, I love gruesome imagery and think it's under utilized, but it was sort of droned out after first 40 lines.



Vote john. Close as fuck