I read this before, and I believe timeless took this easily. Certain had a slow vibe - which effective had the resonance of a goomba. For timeless, I believe this was a step above his average writing and showcased exemplary talent. Certain tried to do too much - with too little and that affected him here.
Short burts like this were needed throughout
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"The smile leaves his face. He tends to get lonely fast.
Another glance out the window,
but no one passes."
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Seemed rush. Timeless had gems sprinkled throughout which made for a very enjoyable read
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No mind of a human could believe that they're the cause of this.
You just figure every other species are clueless and just caught in it.
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My vote goes to timeless.