Smegma, this was cool. Nothing too impressive with your rhymes or flow. The reup on stress relief line was dope. Enjoyed the switch up in the ending. You had plenty to point that out previously in your verse. Good reads man.
Mike, good to see you experimenting with more wordplay than you have in previous weeks. This was a pretty straight forward approach, nothing too great there. I enjoyed the beginning more than the end.
This ia tough to vote on. I felt smeg delivered. He had the concept down, knew where he was going with it and had a more complete piece. Mike had great content, just more rhyme driven than concept.
Voting for smegma
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