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Old 04-27-2014, 11:58 AM   #3
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"It's cool to love, just don't obsess"

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Fuck taxes & fuck dying.. Is it all just coins & phrases?"

Stand outs to me.

This started off strong, a little different style than your normal drops. Shorter lines, still with the rapid fire multis and off-kilter content and rhyming words. I liked everything from the beginning to the 'Still Dive' rhyme scheme, which felt a little choppy and weaker content wise to me. So overall, a strong piece that lost a bit of steam at the end. Dope verse, enjoyed it.
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