[Just Write]

Pancake, this was exceptionally written. So my view on this is basically a socially awkward guy who lives like a hermit and never comes out and finds "refuge" in writing about these characters almost to the point of obsession, immersing himself into their so called lives to escape his own reality. Brilliant, I really can't say anything bad about this piece, it was fully developed, mechanically sound and really top notch vocabulary. Definitely the best verse ive read the week by far.


Oats- Again, a really awesome piece. You guys are definitely the elite of the elite. Im blown away by the quality of this battle. Probably one of the best battles ive ever read and im honored to be voting first on it. Anyways im fron a very religious background.. pops is a pastor and all and while I myself am not religious im smart in the area and I think you definitely wrote an exectional piece as well and this really captured the book of genesis to a tee and I also loved your twisted take on the situation. Ive asked myself the question of "why did god create sin?" Myself in just the bigger scheme of things but if you were to ask this in a doctrinal text this would be flawed of the simple point that god didnt create sin, man did. God gave man choice as to not have "control" over man but more to let man be free. Man made the choice to disobey therefore creating sin. Anyways despite that I really did enjoy this and my only gripe was towards the end there was a few miscues rhyme wise which is very rare for you. Regardless, props.

Ok if this doesnt get battle of the week then ftw, this was as epic as they get. After a long and tiring review again and another couple reads apiece im going to have to go with pancake for a more favorable piece, grwat reads guys

Mvgt-PB