I wish we could tell them this, I wish for the ever so seldom bliss,
the type of unity and respect like if heaven blew hell a kiss.
Damn, definitely the lotb for me. That last line was superb
Timeless, this was a great piece bro, probably the best ive seen from you besides the very first verse you wrote. I loved this all the way up to the got no lunch/ go fishing part. I get where yoh were going but I felt it stuck out with the cadence you set to your piece and the only other part I didnt like is the using shit ass a rhyme word. I this using cuss words for sake of rhyme is a cop out although we all have done it before. But thats only a minor complaint. This was a very well written piece about man vs. Nature, props
Certain, this was not as flashy as some previous pieces you've written, but I love that. This was straight to the point, all meat, no condiments type of sandwhich and you know what.. fuck the mag, i'm a man. I love meat, no but seriously I really enjoyed this piece. It was very descriptive and just really pulled me in and held my attention all the way through. Very nice job sir.
This definitely is botw material, two great pieces by two very talented writers. This is by far my hardest decision so far and is really only based on which piece I enjoyed more since they were both equally written and thatd going to be certain. I just feel like I connected more with his piece on an enjoyment level. Great job to both of you though.
Mvgt=certain
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