the wording here also was enviable: you have a great ability for an almost untouchable conciseness in rhyming, certainly a good distance above my own knack for wording, that always lends itself to being heard. this was dope. it read a bit familiar to me -- i don't know if it's a repost or just the resonance of the 'lunar embezzlement' part, because i felt like i'd read that before.
this was golden.
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