[Adonis]

Smegs- i enjoyed cadence and the pace of verse was top notch. Good writing because in its entirety, just butter as far as comprehension. I liked the opening card reference to clubs, and thought you were going to string that along. Then the fighting and fucking and arguing, but it was she was heroin. I didn't like the twist, well I did, but not execution. You humanized the drug too much. That's my only true gripe, but it is a big one as that was your entire concept. Solid writing though. Good rhyming with no real misstep


Mike- this is going to be a tough vote. Your verse was good, fast paced and decent enough detail and imagery. I think going a bit more horror-core would have been dope, just a few gruesome details in a scene or two. Good flow per usual, solid mechanics even though mostly end rhymes existed, so no vote for complex scheme. Execution was a bit meh to me. I mean solid verse, but the connection to the topic just seemed tossed in. Like this verse was one you wrote previously in a no show, kept it, and just through the ending in for topics sake. Overall this was an enjoyable read though bro. Not on par with last week, but you Def stepped your game up since our battle, which that was a sick verse if I did tell you. I took that L with no resentment.


Vote. This is tough, you both faltered on use of topic which is weird. That's pretty much like the main point yeah? Both had same strengths as well, good progression, solid flow with enough imagery and detail in scenery that kept me intrigued. A tie if I ever saw one. I will read each verse and drop a name, Vote will be based on personal preference.


Smegs

On deeper read she wasn't as humanized as I thought. You played your cards right.