VividlyVague - If you want my honest opinion, this read like it was unfinished. There was a loose sense of closure. A technically interesting story about an alien abduction that enriched a man named Lucas, thereby giving him more of a reason to "live" which goes against the fabric of the topic this week. I could be off in my interpretation though..
Just Write - Good stuff. Right now you're crafting solid stories, but up your level of writing ever so slightly and you'll be a topicalist to be revered. I like old Japanese films, I actually just saw The Last Samurai on a plane ride back to the U.S. so I could identify with the characters more because of it. Nice story, overall.
I've got Just Write winning this.
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