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Old 04-26-2014, 09:44 AM   #13
Vulgar
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Slick write up. I liked it more on the second read - good personality showing through. The rhyming was a bit predictable since the patterns followed a traditional outline I'm used to seeing from you.

See I can be the poet, the dumb guy, and the funny dude
But you'll know it when I run by, you're scum, you're food
^Haha.

I read this verse to this beat: https://crypticone.bandcamp.com/trac...-the-crowsnest

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