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Vulgar · 04-25-2014, 09:06 PM

I'd like for you to write more short stories to help sharpen your cohesive sword. This was a bit hard to follow. I think you have tales to tell that transcend this medium and it comes out awkwardly, restricting your growth in the process.

04-25-2014, 09:06 PM	#5
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	I'd like for you to write more short stories to help sharpen your cohesive sword. This was a bit hard to follow. I think you have tales to tell that transcend this medium and it comes out awkwardly, restricting your growth in the process.