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Originally Posted by Coup
to me, what sets dead apart is his ability to piece together stark sayings, things, nouns and make them tangible to a motive of a person and his emotions behind them...it's all in that expression in his thought into an action
this opening is a good example
dont get me wrong, there are plenty of solid heads around these part.
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is this now a cypher thread?
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I assumed it was. Admittedly I rarely write stuff like this. I just posted it for lols.
Dead man makes good use of his sentences. I like the opening couple lines, but the biblical reference part fell flat for me. ENG's 'un-learning patience' section was genius.