i liked these lines a lot for their structuring and repeating ideas in different way
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If the doctrine’s philosophy - I disregard your awkward hypotheses and illogical oddities.
If the doctrine’s psychology - I’m a cognitive war machine, you get a course filled with thorazine for trying to spar with me consciously.
If the doctrine is policy - my style reigns supreme with a sovereign authority and lawful autonomy.
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also enjoyed when you shifted ot paragraph style as the rhyme, rhyme, rhyme theme was almost muscial..nice
also I did not believe the ego...only because you only show a side of being only perfect, while we know all greats have some weakness and in that we can appropriate how far they came by overcoming. You did not overcome but were already on top from the get...who can relate?
idk if this is valid to you, but this is how i thought. peace