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You should definitely get into spoken word.


I really enjoyed the sections where you had alternating rhymes that shared a syllable. It gave the whole piece a feeling of cohesion and a sick little backbeat.

I enjoyed your content, but it always seems to be the same brand of eclectic... I think for you it is all about the rhymes, so I look forward to seeing your rhymescapes expand and your writing itself grow as a result.

The diction and rhyming was more mature here. Way more confident in your writing. Its crazy what a writing break does to your whole style.