Mike Wrecka
Flawless flow from the start. Phenomenonal pacing in combination with thought provoking ideas is a plus. You either chose not to continue the use of rhyme schemes or you systematically opened up at a high level as a sort of grand style opening scene. The tree going through different stages and personifying an object is vintage Mike Wrecka. Well done conceptually. Only fault was the anticlimactic rhyme patterns instead of the focused penmanship. Felt let down in that regard, but the the actual idea and execution was champions calibre.
El Pancakebrah.
Serene verse here. I actually really enjoyed it. The free spirit of the writing spoke to the picture in a relaxed manner reminiscent of non chalant summer timeness. It was up to the minute mundane, and living in the moment like.
Surprisingly enough, I got El Pancakebrah with the W.
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