mike wrecka - i enjoyed your flow and your diction. there was a good use of vocabulary in this piece. i enjoyed the multis and internals throughout this piece, i wish they were a little more consistent, but i understand sometimes you just can't make it work without sacrificing the content. this was a good piece to read, good imagery and ideas presented. good piece man.
el pancake - this was dope. i enjoyed the flow and the consistent use of multis and internals. good display of vocabulary in this piece, nice smooth diction throughout. good imagery, and overall enjoyable to read.
i thought this was my favorite battle think week, both great pieces, both the type of pieces i like to read and am used to reading, to me this was battle of the week with two solid pieces but el pancake's piece stood out to me a little more, on a close battle like this, i'll let that be the deciding factor.
vote el pancake.
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