ok interesting battle here
zygote - took the topic a little too far imo. echoed the storybook picture with a childrens story book sounding verse. it came off simplistic in rhyme scheme and mechanics. the story itself was cool. just the lack of any type of technical fire power was a bit jarring. but I do understand the tone he was going for, and he nailed it I just think it backfired
mmlp - your verse also come off rather simplistic. lacking multis or a complex rhyme structure. but where your opponent at least had some vivid imagery your verse was rather mundane. wasn't very polished I don't think you spent much time on it
vote - zygote
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