I liked both pieces in different chemistry. Timeless had a linear movement throughout a cohesive thought, and frank brought about thematic elements to describe a rather obvious picture with inanimate stuff sprinkled throughout. Pretty classic on both ends. Timeless withered away mid paragraph and sort of tried to tie up a far-fetched story. Frank stayed the same throughout with an abrupt finishing. Overall I think frank created the image that was most liked between the two.
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