View Single Post
Old 04-20-2014, 02:25 PM   #9
Just Write
Senior Member
 
Just Write's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,709
Battle Record: 9-12



Rep Power: 4997617
Just Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant futureJust Write has a brilliant future
Default

Consciousness is overrated, dreams are where hope is naked
We see them bare, trying to breathe this air could choke the sacred
I'm a leader - scared, but with a potent cadence
Glowing - fragrant, trying not to grow impatient

This was a dope segment and I really enjoyed the switch ups. Inspires me to try something like this.


Thoughts are swarming where the demons crawl, and it's dark
Sometimes I'm feeling tall, other times I'm weak and small
Smothered by a life that would make any other guy cease and fall
But I'm about to release the dog, I've just found the piece, the cog
To make this machine heave and cough, before it kicks into life
And recedes the smog, I'm leaping the tallest buildings in one bound
What's up now? Now that The King is back, your mouth is shut?
Wow...you spoke the loudest when my mind was full of clouds and stuff
But I get it, now that I'm out, it's tough...lil faggot, fucking powderpuff
I thought you might have something to say bitch, you run ur mouth enough
Now you're wandering about like 'fuck', I've got that thunderous clout

I think this was my favorite section, it just rolled off the tongue and fucking powderpuff make me lol for real. This was a nice verse witty, seemed to be more of an exercise to shake off the rust, though judging from this piece there's not much rust. Props my dude, if me have a chance peep mine and vivids drop. Peace
__________________
Just Write is offline   Reply With Quote