Oats- amazingly deep piece, given the down-to-earth language and subtle approach. This piece is proof that topicals have a place here, as you seem to breathe more and more life into the form every week. Your rhyme schemes were terrific and the piece execution as a whole was flawless. I can honestly say I have no complaints. Great job.
Ra.- you did a profound job here. I loved the intricate scheming you started with, and although it kind of withered to a simpler set of schemes onward, this came off really clean. Your piece was conceptually dope, much in the same vein as Oats, but with more of a story's narrative focus. I think your piece speaks more aggressively to underlying issues of corruption and political agenda. Great drop.
This was indeed a contender for BOTW, hands down. You both came out prepared for a bout and it was definitely had. I love both of your pieces, as they resonate with me on a technical level and on my personal opinions and thoughts about the matters you both hit on. Terrific battle guys. I think for this, as almost always, I will go with the more lasting impression. MVGT Ra. For a more aggressively written take on the topic. Seriously, dope battle you two.
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