oats - you flex some pretty impressive descriptive muscles throughout that conveys in essence the Fallout:esque aesthetic of actual pictures of the place. Technically I like that you play around with your schemes (less rigidity allows for smoother lyrical diction in my experience). Innoncence lost is so very human a theme.
King Ra. - Your verse shared some of the illustrative qualities of your opponent's in that you drew imagery from diverse sources formulating a lamentation of sorts. Somehiting that impressed me was that you managed to make dialog in full couplets sound semi-natural (which is insanely hard to do while adhering to to a rhyme structure).
I'll give my vote to oats for the somber atmosphere it conveyed. Excellent topical clash here fellas.
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