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Old 04-19-2014, 09:24 AM   #2
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Well damn, what a combo. What a collab. And great fucking story. This shit reeled me in from the start, so much so, by the end, I couldn't leave without dropping feed. You both did the damn thing. Two of the best with dialouge. It read smoothly and made sense. I liked the pace. The scheme was on point. The story intriguing, I mean the fact you guys took this idea and made something solid out of it is top-notch. Don't matter who wrote what, everything is solid, start to finish. Great job, gents.
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