Both were similar in content and approach. Most other things being equal the shorter lines from JM were preferable to the slightly longer lines by d0ubt. Some phrases like 'onus-mantled' just seems like rhyming for the sake of rhyming. d0ubt had more natural language, even though some of the rhyme schemes were kind of cliched, E.g., throat tactics, broke addicts, no cabbage etc. Overall it was close, voting for d0ubt.
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