Ill be honest... I didnt like either of these.
Zygote this seemed really sub-par from your usuall drops and the ending was so abrupt, here than gone. I was kinda just sitting here like what the fuck. Idk it just felt uninspired.
MMLP
same with yours, just felt boring and like I was just going through the motions of reading this because I had to. When I read a piece I want to be ao into it that I cant wait for it to end, not the other way around. I actually liked how you started but it just dragged along and didnt really fit the topic very well.
I dont know, both of these pieces felt like half effort pieces to me and it really just boils down to execution in this one and I feel zy wo. That by a fuckin nut hair.
Mvgt=zygote
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