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Old 04-18-2014, 02:22 AM   #4
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This is the first time ive read anything from either of you but I can say I was impressed by both.


John Boy, (ever seen the Walton's) anyways really spectacular flow and mechanics were tight as fuck. Also you had great imagery for such short lines. Obv an alias but I wonder who, first that comes to mind is inn nik or copypat. Either way this was a great piece. Props




Doubt, I liked your piece as well but I felt it wasnt as crisp as john boys but I feel you did paint some nice pictures in my head, although the fuck is the kinder egg milk shit? Where you from? Anyways I feel like if you would have reworded a few spots and brought a little more imagery to your piece it would have helped but this was boring to me for the most part.


Ok why do you guys feel the need to post the photo in your verse like its not at the top of the thread? Lol anyways good battle guys, im definitely looking forward to reading more from you both. This week john boy takes it for me though

Mvgt=john boy
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