This was great. I usually dislike short pieces dropped as Open Mics but that's because 90% of the time they're just one-off cypher verses looking for attention. This was purposefully short. The imagery and wording was strong. You should write like this in the league. Not the subject matter but the style. Your sense of description and wording are top-notch and in full force here. It's difficult to pick something I disliked about it. You kept it exactly as long as it should have been. Just a shot glass of dopeness.
Good stuff.
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