Thread: Midnight Melody
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Old 04-16-2014, 07:16 AM   #3
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Are we givin' feed or addin' on? Anyways...

the crawling geometry - oh so beautiful, reticent
a checkered cage of silhouettes confusing our essences
muting the messages, but your body language spoke to me
delicate whispers of your curvaceous coquetry
like the motion of your shoulders as they rolled to a broken C
disrobed in the cold; I felt the throws of the moment freeze
everything is relative - we are not floating free
the gravity of the moment collapsed as I pulled you close to me

^^That's tight as fuck.

Great imagery man...loved the first line also, but the section I quoted above is so nice with it.Content as a whole is slick...emotion packed no doubt, really enjoyable piece in every aspect.

Rtf if you can, or whatevers.

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