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i typically don't hang around the OM, 'cause I'm more geared toward HEARING flow and reading along.

with that said, sadly it's hard for me to get into in this format.


onto the critique:

the first second flowed extremely well. it read and flowed practically like conversational speech. the content was real dark, but believable and poignant. i like the first segment quite a bit.

the second segment. although the batman references was pretty clever, i think it made my start thinking about the comic books, which distracted me from what was very serious. not harping on it too much though, it got back on track with the whole idea of being controlled by a bad guy.


the final segment. sick imagery, although lighting him on fire wasn't truly explained, the suggestion of it was enough i guess. it seemed to end abruptly, i would've liked to see a bit more dialogue, 'cause it was pretty fucking cool. but the imagery was definitely the strong point of this segment, and the entire piece as a whole.


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