[Adonis]

two enjoyeable reads. I did not read the opening stanza in Ziggie's verse, instead dove right in. It was a mind fuck. Different take on topic and splendid execution. From start to end I loved the read, even more on second time around. Vivi, I liked the hint of sadistic thoughts as this is under utilized in this league. I wrote two verses this week, the second was extremely gruesome, opted to not use it as I doubt it would be taken lovingly. Your verse was decent at best, the concept is dope. The writing and overall execution faultered somewhere after the actual kidnapping and the bright lights scene

I'm voting Zygote with his well written, thought provoking abortion ode over elvis being taken by aliens??

V/Ziggie