Kayge, this was a great read. Wild ending yo that shit sucks lol. this wasnt what I expected out of you lyrically though, ive seen you come with way better rhyme schemes you had here but nevertheless it was a smooth read. Nothing really to complain about. Dope story, well rounded, loved the approach to the topic.
Certain, this was dope. Was the erasers a max ride reference? The wording was crisp here with plenty of intracate schemes throughout. I dont understand what topic you were writing to, is the waken up at 3am one? loved the character you created here.
another tight matchup, certain came with the more polished piece lyrically, whereas rhet had the concept down to a tee. As for the more enjoyable piece I have to give it to certain. Good battle though this could go either way.
V. Certain
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