Nyc, this was entertaining to say the least, that santa clause line was priceless, the smiley face had me rollin lol. But yo as much as I did like it, I didnt. As much detail as there was, a lot of it strayed and was hard to keep up with it. The wordplay was dope, multis and flow were on point etc.
Wit, this was cool, it took a little bit for me to get into it. Some forced wording, I enjoyed how you ran with it though. Just wish there was more of a backstory to it, felt it took to long to introduce what was actually going on.
Hard one for me, toto killed that flow tho, his content was dope but I dont think you had a better take on a topic this week than wit. Witty had a good mix of comedy and emotion into a pretty well rounded story and was the more enjoyable read for me.
V. Witty
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