[Adonis]

Frank. Did not like use of topic as it had nothing to do with jail, instead a death row Mac, max security prison. Word choice to was rather up and down. Electric combust was dope, then insinuating fit ok,but not typically used in that form lessened the effect Imo. Verse per usual was descriptive to the max. Decent verse, but not much going on. Final two bars seemed tossed in there for closures sake.

Sunny. Shots fired. A bit of narcissism huh? I liked the fact this was literally about overthrowing Frank. Dope, at least that's what I took away. Flow was on point. Great choice of end rhyme. Not many multi but people seem to over look successive rhyming in short bar, essentially the same thing right? Any ways, I enjoyed the scenery even if it was short lived and you switched from scenery to just narrating about why and shit. Dope verse, honestly one of my favorites of entire season

Vote king. Better flow, stronger ending and better use of topic.