Wow, @
rhetoric I have to say this is one of the nicest verses I've read this season. Really crisp storytelling, awesome offbeat rhyme choices. I was full-on into this piece, liked the ending... I'm really surprised its not getting a lot of love but it was brilliant imo.
Certain, I was really enamored with Rhet's piece and would've needed something exceptional to topple my bias. I think the story was a little too blazay though and it never really gripped me.
Rhetoric in an easy win for me on this one.