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first time voting..... both were good reads tbf.

rhetoric your story was really good, wasn't as skilful in lyricism as I usually prefer but the concept, storytelling leading to the twist was good.

but certain's verse, it was crafted so well, really condensed compared to rhetoric's and yet more effective, more in skilled in its explanatory in my opinion, choice of wording and range of vocabulary tipped it for me.

Enjoyed the battle

v/Certain