I hate paragraph shit.. @
CopyPat is probably the only cat that makes it enjoyable to read for me when structured that way, but you did your thing and it turned out pretty nice.Flow was straight...a few lines made me lol especially the runnin' through you like the beer shits one as I can relate hard to that bein' an alcoholic and all, I liked it man...thought it was a good read as a whole.
Stay upwards.