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rhetoric you seem to have a good grasp of storytelling, nice pacing, a good writers voice and the drunken text message showed me you've a humourous edge to you as well, which could serve you well in this league as there aren't many of you around. I think what you lack in the technical aspects you make up for in your storytelling strengths. You're a good addition to the league. You remind me of Saila, truth be told, take that how you will...
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Certain had a polished piece here, the guy is well honed in his craft and he takes a lot of beating, I thought you hated when I did this originally, Certain?!
Quote:
We will escape, my comrades. This repressive regime
is not the end of the sea. There's more than empty disease.
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with the whole broken sentence in line one thing!?
LOL
I see you.
Overall I just felt Certain had a more rounded technical display to his writing, concept and execution than rhetoric here. Certain gets my vote.