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Old 04-11-2014, 06:16 AM   #8
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Some good expression of patriotism with the GREAT BRITAIN in capital letters part, and some extra train of thought stuff to end it. The ending was a nice little poetic thing, reminiscent of a propaganda slogan. Pretty straightforward which was good and fit the subject matter. Compared with the first which had a good use of the unreliable narrator, unexpected ending + italics were subtle to give the E.T.'s an alien-feel. Voting for BB.
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