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Old 04-11-2014, 01:43 AM   #3
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Enjoyed
6 out of 7.9

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Like a moment of weakness
A vulnerable state
I’ll always come back because I’ve learned to love the taste.

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Raw emotion at its peak.
Thought you spoke about writing in rhyme in general. You enjoy it,yet miss it and return often in a decade.
I have read linear thought before, Entire verse was as such.
Quoted area is strong .
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