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Now nearly everyones out of this I can see you all struggling for feedback but let me oblige while i have a few mins spare

Originally Posted by Camp Bell

i've come to attack, i hope you invest in some armor
or we'll see sharp pee as his muscles relax, after i stab him to death with this marker
Your going for a sharpie pen marker which i got, but it aint really working for me - nice attempt i tried thinking of how to tie a sharpie in an you at least came close
you think you lucky for using god of war assistance?
you just another victim of a killer, whale...in other words, i never had to pay orca visit
nice
i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
ok
this what i came for? a matchup with this slapstick actor
ya reenactment scene as a wack verse, this episode of SNL, is not a laughing matter
ok
i read the mag then smoked this herb cuz my joints blunt
fuck ya dime&nick pitch, Sn00p must get high to type predictions, if you're his choice bud
Hmmm I think you could of reworded this and tweeked this for some nice wordplay but in the current state its just an ok for me
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharpmeh not for me

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
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Battling a guy who Jo E. Murder beat? This round's a treat, dude
You should consider getting a Ghostwriter... cuz even that clown can beat you
lol
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
lol nice
Hes spent all week workin in his forum, can tell this gays scared
fuck putting ur nose to the grindstone... I'll stick his whole face there
lol tut tut
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
not the best ive seen from you
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one
ok

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