nice to see you haven't missed a step.
you always had a very aggressive style. apparently its timeless because it fits right in with the zeitgeist of open mic even to this day. I'm assuming you wrote this recently but i really have no way to be sure.
original word choices. rhythmically sound, your writing has personality which many people actually struggle to project. the whole piece was a touch autobiographical and mainly flexing to reintroduce yourself to the culture and the community. as you may have already seen, you've made a lasting name for yourself but it will not keep you in the books for long. many people survive off their legacy while absent and make a less-than grandiose return only to be cast aside. time is strange like that.
fortunately for you, you have the gift of consistency on your side.
interested in seeing something more introspective or focused from you. maybe something less broadly focused. there were a couple lines in here i thought were weaker than the rest, such as
anybody giving flattery gets no backup so if you're mad at me get blown.
and you're completely stable in your grounded worry, kid.
and a few others not even worth mentioning..
but overall, really great to see you back in action old friend. its a refreshing feeling.
keep on it. thanks
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