cool battle guys.
timeless - a pretty cool take on the topic imo. nature violently attacking the earth on a daily basis seen as a war or battle so to speak. the verse itself was a little mundane. it flowed well. but it felt slightly uninspired. overall solid showing here. but maybe not for a contender match.
Adonis = it felt like you rushed this piece. the flow was lacking a bit. this verse was narrated by god but you had him talking like a thug in some parts. that's missed the mark. I don't think god would say you need to be blinged out homie. or whatever. it was strange. you could have really captured a godly tone but didn't. overall it was decent. it had its upside like a good use of vocab in some spots.
vote - cai
he seemed to give a bit more effort here
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